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Silence is GoldenYou stutter, sentences unfinished.
You tell me that you don't know how to say it,
How to structure your sentences.
And I say that it's okay.
It's okay to stutter,
To not complete sentences.
It's okay to not know
What to say.

It's okay.
MeteoriteYou used to glow bright and strong.
Fighting against the inky sky
Lighting the way for others to follow.

And then you began to falter.

You lost your shine.
You lost your fight.

You became a falling star.

And I'm sorry I couldn't be there
The way you were
When I fell.

I'm sorry I couldn't catch you.
Static                Music

my
               e   s    c     a      p        e

has now become
                       s o u n d.

       N               I               E
               O               S

an annoying                     B   U   Z   Z

what's         H  A  P  P  E  N  I  N  G               ?
SpiderI stay afloat with a web of lies.

Honesty does not help me catch prey.

             It starves me.
Cherry BombCandy shrapnel
in my mouth.
My blood
tastes like
cherry.

                    
              Would you like a taste?

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They
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You'd
Come.
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Done for #FourLinePoems' Competition.

Wanted to do something that kinda meant something to me... So yeah. I don't like the title, but I couldn't think of another. Thought about this for a long time before posting it up.
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Mood: Relief =CHLI Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're one of the winners! Congratulations =D
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~RustyMutt Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :)
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=CHLI Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome
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^Kaz-D Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hello!
The contest results have been announced! :)
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=CHLI Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very touching =( This is really great, I think you'll be one of the winners. It's remarkable what sort of feelings you can invoke in the reader in 4 simple words. Also, I really like the title, it's very fitting.
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~RustyMutt Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you. ^^ I'd be very surprised if I win.
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=CHLI Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! Good luck!
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